Peter/Alice Fluff

[flytastic]

BECAUSE I SAID I WOULD POST THIS LIKE FOUR DAYS AGO.

HERE IT IS.

Peter/Alice Fluff!

Peter totes tells Alice that he drunkenly loves her one night... and then the morning after. <3 See the schmoop prompt for the first part of the story. Even though this is longer.

ANYWAY - LOVE THEM!

Comments

[ru]

Even though I've been shadowing as you've been writing this, I still have to say that it's AMAZINGLY ADORABLE. I love their derpy awkwardness (especially Peter's flailing over the predicament he got himself into) and Alice being her usual chatterboxy self and the moment where they finally do get their act together (and Deon's total ruining of it XD). Overall it's sweet and cute and derpy and LOVE SO MUCH. <3 <3 <3

[thez]

FINALLY I HAVE READ THIS FLUFF!

Things I enjoyed:

- His embarrassment at having peed with the door open. Priorities.
- Peter treating Alice like a glass of wine in one of those mattress commercials, or an angry dog, as he lies back down.
- DEON JONES: MOMENT KILLER.
- The forehead bump.
- Overall it felt true to the characters, I think, and the fact that in spite of everything else, they're still a pair of derpy college kids.

YAYE!